This is what my teachers commented: GDSJan 12, 2012 08:09 AMThere are some strong images here, Mandy - I particularly like the oblique angles (very Third Man - great potential).Adding discussion of these images will strengthen this further. Here's an example so you can see what I mean:http://madeleinafleur.blogspot.com/2010/12/location-shots-for-our-final-idea.htmlReply2. vmbJan 12, 2012 08:58 AMThe tilt shots are good, but often more effective if the camera is just slightly tilted. Practice more long angle shots. I am very pleased with the effort you are making Mandy.